svn commit: r53242 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-releng

[John Baldwin]

Author: jhb
Date: Tue Jul  9 23:59:30 2019
New Revision: 53242
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/53242

Log:
  A few more wording tweaks to the section on ENs.
  
  - Use "revisions from the stable/ branch" instead of
    "revisions against the stable/ branch".
  - Use "the <foo> team".
  
  Reviewed by:	gjb
  Differential Revision:	https://reviews.freebsd.org/D20902

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-releng/article.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-releng/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-releng/article.xml	Tue Jul  9 20:26:04 2019	(r53241)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-releng/article.xml	Tue Jul  9 23:59:30 2019	(r53242)
@@ -473,15 +473,15 @@
 
       <para>The completed Errata Notice template should be emailed
 	together with either a patch against the &branch.releng;
-	branch or a list of revisions against the &branch.stable;
+	branch or a list of revisions from the &branch.stable;
 	branch.</para>
 
       <para>For Errata Notice requests immediately following the
-	release, the request should be emailed to both &team.re; and
-	&team.secteam;.  Once the &branch.releng; branch has been
-	handed over to &team.secteam; as described in <xref
+	release, the request should be emailed to both the &team.re; and
+	the &team.secteam;.  Once the &branch.releng; branch has been
+	handed over to the &team.secteam; as described in <xref
 	  linkend="releng-wrapup-handoff"/>, Errata Notice requests
-	should be sent to &team.secteam;.</para>
+	should be sent to the &team.secteam;.</para>
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2 xml:id="releng-wrapup-handoff">