svn commit: r53241 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-releng

[Glen Barber]

Author: gjb
Date: Tue Jul  9 20:26:04 2019
New Revision: 53241
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/53241

Log:
  Further clarify what is required for an EN request submission.
  
  Submitted by:	jhb
  Sponsored by:	Rubicon Communications, LLC (Netgate)

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-releng/article.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-releng/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-releng/article.xml	Tue Jul  9 19:28:21 2019	(r53240)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-releng/article.xml	Tue Jul  9 20:26:04 2019	(r53241)
@@ -464,23 +464,24 @@
       </note>
 
       <para>To request an Errata Notice after a release cycle has
-	completed, it is most helpful to fill out the <link
+	completed, a developer should fill out the <link
 	  xlink:href="https://www.freebsd.org/security/errata-template.txt">Errata
 	  Notice template</link>, in particular the
 	<literal>Background</literal>, <literal>Problem
 	  Description</literal>, <literal>Impact</literal>, and if
 	applicable, <literal>Workaround</literal> sections.</para>
 
+      <para>The completed Errata Notice template should be emailed
+	together with either a patch against the &branch.releng;
+	branch or a list of revisions against the &branch.stable;
+	branch.</para>
+
       <para>For Errata Notice requests immediately following the
 	release, the request should be emailed to both &team.re; and
 	&team.secteam;.  Once the &branch.releng; branch has been
 	handed over to &team.secteam; as described in <xref
 	  linkend="releng-wrapup-handoff"/>, Errata Notice requests
-	should be sent to &team.secteam;.  In either case, the email
-	should contain at least the patch against the &branch.releng;
-	branch (and the Errata Notice template, if it had been filled
-	in), or the revision(s) to be included in the Errata
-	Notice.</para>
+	should be sent to &team.secteam;.</para>
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2 xml:id="releng-wrapup-handoff">