svn commit: r50186 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall
Remko Lodder
remko at FreeBSD.org
Thu Apr 20 10:43:10 UTC 2017
Author: remko
Date: Thu Apr 20 10:43:08 2017
New Revision: 50186
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/50186
Log:
Use uppercase W at the beginning of a new sentence.
Found while translating the document.
Facilitated by: Snow B.V.
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Thu Apr 20 04:06:34 2017 (r50185)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Thu Apr 20 10:43:08 2017 (r50186)
@@ -1633,7 +1633,7 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID
including stripe (not recommended, no redundancy), mirror
(best performance, least usable space), and RAID-Z 1, 2, and 3
(with the capability to withstand the concurrent failure of 1,
- 2, and 3 disks, respectively). while selecting the pool type,
+ 2, and 3 disks, respectively). While selecting the pool type,
a tooltip is displayed across the bottom of the screen with
advice about the number of required disks, and in the case of
RAID-Z, the optimal number of disks for each
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