svn commit: r44629 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot

Dru Lavigne dru at
Tue Apr 22 17:52:05 UTC 2014

Author: dru
Date: Tue Apr 22 17:52:05 2014
New Revision: 44629

  Fix a few grammos.
  Sponsored by:	iXsystems


Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.xml
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.xml	Tue Apr 22 17:49:42 2014	(r44628)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.xml	Tue Apr 22 17:52:05 2014	(r44629)
@@ -81,9 +81,9 @@
 	Adventures of Baron Munchausen</citetitle>.  A character had
       fallen part way down a manhole, and pulled himself out by
       grabbing his bootstraps and lifting.  In the early days of
-      computing the term <firstterm>bootstrap</firstterm> was applied
-      to the mechanism used to load the operating system, which has
-      become shortened to <quote>booting</quote>.</para>
+      computing, the term <firstterm>bootstrap</firstterm> was applied
+      to the mechanism used to load the operating system.  It has
+      since become shortened to <quote>booting</quote>.</para>
@@ -447,7 +447,7 @@ boot:</screen>
       <para>Use <filename>kernel.GENERIC</filename> to refer to the
 	default kernel that comes with an installation, or
-	<filename>kernel.old</filename><indexterm><primary><filename>kernel.old</filename></primary></indexterm>
+	<filename>kernel.old</filename>,
 	 to refer to the previously installed kernel before a system
 	 upgrade or before configuring a custom kernel.</para>
@@ -549,7 +549,7 @@ boot:</screen>
 	<para>A user can specify this mode by booting with
-	  <option>-s</option>, or by setting the <envar>boot
+	  <option>-s</option> or by setting the <envar>boot
 	  _ single</envar> variable in
 	  <application>loader</application>.  It can also be reached
 	  by running <command>shutdown now</command> from multi-user

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