svn commit: r39068 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook
Sergey Kandaurov
pluknet at FreeBSD.org
Wed Jun 20 06:10:17 UTC 2012
Author: pluknet
Date: Wed Jun 20 06:10:16 2012
New Revision: 39068
URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/39068
Log:
Minor grammar, clarity fixes in entries 900505, 1000006, 1000007
of the __FreeBSD_version values table:
o fix a typo in 'and'
o add the serial comma to promote clarity
o remove a spurious comma from the end of a sentense
Reviewed by: Isabell Long (the Oxford comma)
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml Wed Jun 20 02:28:11 2012 (r39067)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml Wed Jun 20 06:10:16 2012 (r39068)
@@ -15301,7 +15301,7 @@ Reference: <http://www.freebsd.org/po
<entry>March 13, 2012</entry>
<entry>9.0-STABLE after introduction of new tcp(4)
socket options: TCP_KEEPINIT, TCP_KEEPIDLE,
- TCP_KEEPINTVL anf TCP_KEEPCNT, (rev
+ TCP_KEEPINTVL, and TCP_KEEPCNT (rev
<svnref>232945</svnref>).</entry>
</row>
@@ -15359,7 +15359,7 @@ Reference: <http://www.freebsd.org/po
<entry>1000006</entry>
<entry>January 26, 2012</entry>
<entry>10-CURRENT after introduction of read capacity
- data asynchronous notification in the cam(4) layer,
+ data asynchronous notification in the cam(4) layer
(rev <svnref>230590</svnref>).</entry>
</row>
@@ -15368,7 +15368,7 @@ Reference: <http://www.freebsd.org/po
<entry>February 5, 2012</entry>
<entry>10-CURRENT after introduction of new tcp(4)
socket options: TCP_KEEPINIT, TCP_KEEPIDLE,
- TCP_KEEPINTVL anf TCP_KEEPCNT, (rev
+ TCP_KEEPINTVL, and TCP_KEEPCNT (rev
<svnref>231025</svnref>).</entry>
</row>
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