PERFORCE change 161629 for review

[Rene Ladan]

http://perforce.freebsd.org/chv.cgi?CH=161629

Change 161629 by rene at rene_self on 2009/05/05 17:31:06

	[solid-state] : reword sentence in the Apache section.	
	Obtained from:	keramida

Affected files ...

.. //depot/projects/docproj_nl/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/solid-state/article.sgml#16 edit

Differences ...

==== //depot/projects/docproj_nl/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/solid-state/article.sgml#16 (text+ko) ====

@@ -440,9 +440,9 @@
 	directory <filename
 	  class="directory"><replaceable>apache_log_dir</replaceable></filename>
 	outside of <filename class="directory">/var</filename>.
-	Since this directory lives on a read-only filesystem, Apache
-	will probably not work since it will not be able to save any log
-	entries.  If so, it is necessary to add a new directory to the
+	When this directory lives on a read-only filesystem, Apache will
+	not be able to save any log files, and may have problems working.
+	If so, it is necessary to add a new directory to the
 	list of directories in <filename>/etc/rc.d/var</filename> to
 	create in <filename>/var</filename>, and to link
 	<filename class="directory"><replaceable>apache_log_dir</replaceable></filename> to