[patch] en/handbook/ports: another small cleanup

Taras Korenko ds at ukrhub.net
Thu Apr 11 17:38:16 UTC 2013


  Hi, folks.

  Could anyone of doc@ review/comment/approve the following small changes
to en/books/handbook/ports ?


  1) An obvious chunk:
----------------------------------------------------------------------------
Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml
===================================================================
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml	(revision 41406)
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml	(working copy)
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@
       commands.</para>
 
     <para>Both packages and ports understand
-      <emphasis>dependencies</emphasis>. If &man.pkg.add.1; or the
+      <emphasis>dependencies</emphasis>.  If &man.pkg.add.1; or the
       Ports Collection is used to install an application and a
       dependent library is not already installed, the library will
       automatically be installed first.</para>
@@ -1337,7 +1337,7 @@
 
       <para>Once the compile is complete, you are returned to the
 	prompt.  The next step is to install the port using
-	<maketarget>make install</maketarget>:</para>
+	<command>make <maketarget>install</maketarget></command>:</para>
 
       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>make install</userinput>
 ===>  Installing for lsof-4.57
@@ -1670,22 +1670,22 @@
 	<itemizedlist>
 	  <listitem>
 	    <para>Root ports: no dependencies and is not depended on
-	      by other ports</para>
+	      by other ports;</para>
 	  </listitem>
 
 	  <listitem>
 	    <para>Trunk ports: no dependencies, but other ports depend
-	      upon it</para>
+	      upon it;</para>
 	  </listitem>
 
 	  <listitem>
 	    <para>Branch ports: have dependencies and are depended
-	      upon by other ports</para>
+	      upon by other ports;</para>
 	  </listitem>
 
 	  <listitem>
 	    <para>Leaf ports: have dependencies but are not depended
-	      upon by other ports</para>
+	      upon by other ports.</para>
 	  </listitem>
 	</itemizedlist>
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  2) A controversial one:
----------------------------------------------------------------------------
Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml
===================================================================
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml	(revision 41406)
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml	(working copy)
@@ -1778,7 +1778,8 @@
 
       <note>
 	<para>The <command>portsclean</command> utility is part of the
-	  <application>portupgrade</application> suite.</para>
+	  <filename role="package">ports-mgmt/portupgrade</filename>
+	  suite.</para>
       </note>
 
       <para><filename
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  Thanks.

-- 
  Best regards,
  Taras Korenko


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