Suggested rewrite of "FreeBSD Documentation Project: SGML"

[Leonard Zettel]

On Friday 16 July 2004 04:37 am, Peter Pentchev wrote:
> On Thu, Jun 03, 2004 at 11:10:12PM -0400, Leonard Zettel wrote:
> > http://www.lenzettel.com/freebsd/sgml.html
> >
> > Questions, comments, criticisms?
>
> I like it at a first read, but it is somewhat difficult to see exactly
> what changes you have made (the ones in the first couple of sentences
> are obvious).  Could you try to check out the FreeBSD Web site sources
> from the CVS repository, edit the www/en/docproj/sgml.sgml file to
> include your changes, and then send us a patch (or at least your version
> of the sgml.sgml file) so we can comment on the changes themselves? :)
>
> Thanks for your efforts so far!
>
Thank you for your kind words!  As an absolute newbie to FreeBSD,
it has been a real struggle trying to wade through the procedural
thicket to get a modified sgml file.  But I'm working on it!
> G'luck,
Can always use that - thanks.
   -LenZ-
> Peter