[PATCH] Re: docs/74724: handbook network-inetd webpage

[Kevin D. Kinsey, DaleCo, S.P.]

The following reply was made to PR docs/74724; it has been noted by GNATS.

From: "Kevin D. Kinsey, DaleCo, S.P." <kdk at daleco.biz>
To: Francois Ropert <francois.ropert at rezalfr.org>
Cc: freebsd-gnats-submit at freebsd.org
Subject: [PATCH] Re: docs/74724: handbook network-inetd webpage
Date: Mon, 13 Dec 2004 23:35:58 -0600

 Francois Ropert wrote:
 
 >>Number:         74724
 >>Category:       docs
 >>Synopsis:       handbook network-inetd webpage
 >>Confidential:   no
 >>Severity:       non-critical
 >>Priority:       low
 >>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
 >>State:          open
 >>Quarter:        
 >>Keywords:       
 >>Date-Required:
 >>Class:          doc-bug
 >>Submitter-Id:   current-users
 >>Arrival-Date:   Sun Dec 05 15:20:18 GMT 2004
 >>Closed-Date:
 >>Last-Modified:
 >>Originator:     Francois Ropert
 >>Release:        5.3-RELEASE
 >>Organization:
 >>Environment:
 >>    
 >>
 >FreeBSD reloaded 5.3-RELEASE-p1 FreeBSD 5.3-RELEASE-p1 #8: Tue Nov 30 19:15:09 
 >CET 2004 root at reloaded:/usr/src/sys/i386/compile/ASPIRE  i386
 >  
 >
 >>Description:
 >>    
 >>
 >First problem : Miss words in 23.2.3 Command-Line Options section : inetd synopsis missings : [-s maximum ]
 >
 >Second problem :
 >
 >Missing description of -s maximum (after -R rate description and before -a description)
 >
 >  
 >
 Third problem :
 
 >Typo error in 23.2.4 inetd.conf : Comments in the file are preceded by a #.
 >
 ># is surround of antiquote and quotation marks.
 >  
 >
 
 
 Merci, Francois for the problem report.  I have addressed items
 #1 and #2.  The "antiquote" "quote" problem is in the way the
 documents are rendered; in the sgml source files they are listed
 as <quote> </quote>, so someone more experienced than I will
 need to address that, if indeed it can be addressed within the
 current doc build system (IANAE.)
 
 Thanks again for your submission.  I have attached a patch
 below for the Document Project Team to review.
 
 Kevin Kinsey
 
 Affects: /usr/doc/en/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.sgml
 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
 
 --- chapter.sgml        Fri Nov 19 17:19:42 2004
 +++ chapter.sgml.edit   Mon Dec 13 23:27:32 2004
 @@ -158,7 +158,7 @@
        <para><application>inetd</application> synopsis:</para>
  
        <para><option>     inetd [-d] [-l] [-w] [-W] [-c maximum] [-C 
 rate] [-a address | hostname]
 -           [-p filename] [-R rate] [configuration file]</option></para>
 +           [-p filename] [-R rate] [-s maximum] [configuration 
 file]</option></para>
  
        <variablelist>
         <varlistentry>
 @@ -229,6 +229,19 @@
               allows an unlimited number of invocations.</para>
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>
 +
 +      <varlistentry>
 +          <term>-s maximum</term>
 +
 +          <listitem>
 +            <para>Specify the default maximum number of simultaneous
 +             invocations of each service from a single IP address;
 +             the default is unlimited.  May be overridden on a
 +             per-service basis with the
 +             <option>max-child-per-ip</option>
 +              parameter.</para>
 +          </listitem>
 +        </varlistentry>
  
         <varlistentry>
           <term>-a</term>
 
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