Deprecating the signature at the end of pkg-descr

[Pav Lucistnik]

Joe Marcus Clarke píše v st 21. 09. 2005 v 11:25 -0400:

> Pav Lucistnik wrote:
> 
> |
> | Index: book.sgml
> | ===================================================================
> | RCS file:
> /home/dcvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml,v
> | retrieving revision 1.616
> | diff -a -u -r1.616 book.sgml
> | --- book.sgml	20 Sep 2005 22:23:31 -0000	1.616
> | +++ book.sgml	21 Sep 2005 14:41:59 -0000
> | @@ -165,18 +165,15 @@
> |  	      correctly.</para>
> |  	  </note>
> |
> | -	  <para>It is recommended that you sign your name at the end of this
> | -	    file, as in:</para>
> | +	  <para>The following example shows how your
> | +	    <filename>pkg-descr</filename> should look like:</para>
> 
> how ... look like is improper and/or awkward English.  Either use "what
> ... look like" or drop the "like."

I dropped the "like". Thank you.

-- 
Pav Lucistnik <pav at oook.cz>
              <pav at FreeBSD.org>

If God is perfect, why did He create discontinuous functions?
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