Deprecating the signature at the end of pkg-descr

Joe Marcus Clarke marcus at FreeBSD.org
Wed Sep 21 08:24:17 PDT 2005


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Pav Lucistnik wrote:

|
| Index: book.sgml
| ===================================================================
| RCS file:
/home/dcvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml,v
| retrieving revision 1.616
| diff -a -u -r1.616 book.sgml
| --- book.sgml	20 Sep 2005 22:23:31 -0000	1.616
| +++ book.sgml	21 Sep 2005 14:41:59 -0000
| @@ -165,18 +165,15 @@
|  	      correctly.</para>
|  	  </note>
|
| -	  <para>It is recommended that you sign your name at the end of this
| -	    file, as in:</para>
| +	  <para>The following example shows how your
| +	    <filename>pkg-descr</filename> should look like:</para>

how ... look like is improper and/or awkward English.  Either use "what
... look like" or drop the "like."

Joe

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Joe Marcus Clarke
FreeBSD GNOME Team	::	gnome at FreeBSD.org
FreeNode / #freebsd-gnome
http://www.FreeBSD.org/gnome
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