cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/mac chapter.sgml doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/pccard chapter.sgml doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/dev-model book.sgml doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking chapter.sgml doc

[Eitan Adler]

On Sat, Mar 17, 2012 at 8:09 AM, Gavin Atkinson <gavin at freebsd.org> wrote:
>>   1.13      +1 -1      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/pccard/chapter.sgml
>
> This was an intentional use of "that that", and your change alters the
> meaning of the sentence.

I dislike the construction 'that that'. Perhaps the wording should be
"NULL entries mean that the corresponding part of entry..."? Can you
propose different text that works better?

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Eitan Adler
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