cvs commit: www/en about.sgml
Tom Rhodes
trhodes at FreeBSD.org
Tue Nov 7 19:33:04 UTC 2006
On Tue, 7 Nov 2006 18:55:52 +0000
Ceri Davies <ceri at submonkey.net> wrote:
> On Tue, Nov 07, 2006 at 04:54:31PM +0000, Daniel Gerzo wrote:
> > danger 2006-11-07 16:54:31 UTC
> >
> > FreeBSD doc repository
> >
> > Modified files:
> > en about.sgml
> > Log:
> > - improve grammar
>
>
> > | @@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
> > | including CD-ROM, DVD-ROM, floppy disk, magnetic tape,
> > | an MS-DOS® partition, or if you have a network
> > | connection, you can install it <i>directly</i> over
> > | - anonymous FTP or NFS. All you need is
> > | + anonymous FTP or NFS. All you need are
> > | <a
> > | href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install.html">these
> > | directions</a>.</p>
>
> This change isn't correct - "these directions" is the object of this
> sentence and the verb "is" should agree with the subject "all you need",
> which is singular.
>
> See sections 5.23 and 5.24 of the CMS.
You're right, I didn't think well enough here.
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Tom Rhodes
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