[Bug 273983] Handbook: Minor issues and TODO in new Jails chapter

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Date: Wed, 20 Sep 2023 18:08:51 UTC 
https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=273983

            Bug ID: 273983
           Summary: Handbook: Minor issues and TODO in new Jails chapter
           Product: Documentation
           Version: Latest
          Hardware: Any
                OS: Any
            Status: New
          Severity: Affects Many People
          Priority: ---
         Component: Books & Articles
          Assignee: doc@FreeBSD.org
          Reporter: bspiegel100@gmail.com

Created attachment 245074
  --> https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/attachment.cgi?id=245074&action=edit
Suggested patch

I've just finished reading the new Jails chapter in the handbook
(https://cgit.freebsd.org/doc/commit/?id=612b7cc1). It looks
terrific--carlavilla@ did a great job rewriting this chapter!

I spotted some minor issues: one TODO placeholder to add a missing xref and
various nitpicky grammar and style issues throughout (e.g. typos, comma
splices, serial comma, title case, etc.).

Attached is a patch with suggested fixes and copyedits. I corrected the usage
but tried to avoid any substantive changes. Happy to adjust if you have
feedback or questions.

Thanks for considering!

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