git: 8422d54f4010 - main - Correct a handful of typos and grammos.
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Date: Tue, 22 Mar 2022 20:13:35 UTC
The branch main has been updated by schweikh:
URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/src/commit/?id=8422d54f401074bea68b0abd7cd18b8c8be910f5
commit 8422d54f401074bea68b0abd7cd18b8c8be910f5
Author: Jens Schweikhardt <schweikh@FreeBSD.org>
AuthorDate: 2022-03-22 20:12:42 +0000
Commit: Jens Schweikhardt <schweikh@FreeBSD.org>
CommitDate: 2022-03-22 20:12:42 +0000
Correct a handful of typos and grammos.
---
usr.sbin/bsdinstall/bsdinstall.8 | 16 +++++++++-------
1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
diff --git a/usr.sbin/bsdinstall/bsdinstall.8 b/usr.sbin/bsdinstall/bsdinstall.8
index ee23fb4cecc4..6aff3f4f3c37 100644
--- a/usr.sbin/bsdinstall/bsdinstall.8
+++ b/usr.sbin/bsdinstall/bsdinstall.8
@@ -347,7 +347,7 @@ Default:
.Dq zroot
.It Ev ZFSBOOT_POOL_CREATE_OPTIONS
Options to be used when creating the base system's pool.
-Each option must be followed by the -O flag to be taken into consideration
+Each option must be preceded by the -O flag to be taken into consideration
or the pool will not be created due to errors using the command
.Cm zpool .
Default:
@@ -391,7 +391,7 @@ keyfile used to encrypt the pool where the base system is stored.
Default:
.Dq Pa /boot/encryption.key
.It Ev ZFSBOOT_BOOT_POOL
-If set a separated boot pool will be created for the kernel of the
+If set, a separated boot pool will be created for the kernel of the
system and
.Xr loader 8 .
Default: unset
@@ -440,8 +440,8 @@ following datasets:
.Pa /$ZFSBOOT_BEROOT_NAME/$ZFSBOOT_BOOTFS_NAME .
See
.Sx ZFS DATASETS
-for more information about who to write this variable and to
-take a look into the default value of it.
+for more information about how to populate this variable and
+its default value.
.It Ev ZFSBOOT_CONFIRM_LAYOUT
If set and the installation is interactive, allow the user to confirm
the layout before continuing with the installation.
@@ -542,12 +542,14 @@ the preamble can contain the variable
instead of
.Ev PARTITIONS
(see below).
-If using .Cm zfsboot, the variables
+If using
+.Cm zfsboot ,
+the variables
.Ev ZFSBOOT_DISKS
and
.Ev ZFSBOOT_VDEV_TYPE
must be set to create the pool of disks for the base system.
-Usually, for a mirrored booting disk, this two variables looks like this:
+Usually, for a mirrored booting disk, these two variables look like this:
.Bd -literal -offset indent
ZFSBOOT_DISKS="ada0 ada1"
ZFSBOOT_VDEV_TYPE=mirror
@@ -575,7 +577,7 @@ partitioning tool takes the
.Ev ZFSBOOT_DATASETS
variable to create the ZFS datasets on the base system.
This variable definition can become large if the pool contains many datasets.
-The default value of the
+The default value of
.Ev ZFSBOOT_DATASETS
is:
.Bd -literal -offset indent