From nobody Tue Mar 22 20:13:35 2022 X-Original-To: dev-commits-src-main@mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 870701A28979; Tue, 22 Mar 2022 20:13:35 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from git@FreeBSD.org) Received: from mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:3]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256 client-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) client-digest SHA256) (Client CN "mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org", Issuer "R3" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4KNN3M3MPvz4fWB; Tue, 22 Mar 2022 20:13:35 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from git@FreeBSD.org) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=freebsd.org; s=dkim; t=1647980015; h=from:from:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date:message-id:message-id: to:to:cc:mime-version:mime-version:content-type:content-type: content-transfer-encoding:content-transfer-encoding; bh=sk1EFhJs6iPIHFMVxNP8kHidDUwbNbF2i28h7aT+w+E=; b=qHtcnbRQjAhhc71eg234E8wj+qqGpYfN003vskJ981fVNuHw43xbFaX873bk1BsgO8yNMX WD0JPbvDoLodCzq3Ky9WFPsWNjWSfsd7KaCfVIwEz7NgSvm1kY/od2sKcnVlx/oAnsLPTZ ns7ZsBDx8baBWYW/mcHRFO3PHYW6FZDE/zz6tzl3oCQDZWjzWosXyLFZ+HglskEsfJEF2H xouGVUxmW62Q0e+T6+zsq3aS+qM7iSG99kTOBmWo44jGHHBC6ziBP/IRIX8jicwTqV+bMR cyM1bLlOnd6ZtWG2nzYblkkW9Ee8nv9+cWL33IrjTTLRCxYq6/1Duk+fpFc2Pw== Received: from gitrepo.freebsd.org (gitrepo.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:6068::e6a:5]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256) (Client did not present a certificate) by mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 533AE15E65; Tue, 22 Mar 2022 20:13:35 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from git@FreeBSD.org) Received: from gitrepo.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.44]) by gitrepo.freebsd.org (8.16.1/8.16.1) with ESMTP id 22MKDZrk008747; Tue, 22 Mar 2022 20:13:35 GMT (envelope-from git@gitrepo.freebsd.org) Received: (from git@localhost) by gitrepo.freebsd.org (8.16.1/8.16.1/Submit) id 22MKDZw3008746; Tue, 22 Mar 2022 20:13:35 GMT (envelope-from git) Date: Tue, 22 Mar 2022 20:13:35 GMT Message-Id: <202203222013.22MKDZw3008746@gitrepo.freebsd.org> To: src-committers@FreeBSD.org, dev-commits-src-all@FreeBSD.org, dev-commits-src-main@FreeBSD.org From: Jens Schweikhardt Subject: git: 8422d54f4010 - main - Correct a handful of typos and grammos. 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Default: @@ -391,7 +391,7 @@ keyfile used to encrypt the pool where the base system is stored. Default: .Dq Pa /boot/encryption.key .It Ev ZFSBOOT_BOOT_POOL -If set a separated boot pool will be created for the kernel of the +If set, a separated boot pool will be created for the kernel of the system and .Xr loader 8 . Default: unset @@ -440,8 +440,8 @@ following datasets: .Pa /$ZFSBOOT_BEROOT_NAME/$ZFSBOOT_BOOTFS_NAME . See .Sx ZFS DATASETS -for more information about who to write this variable and to -take a look into the default value of it. +for more information about how to populate this variable and +its default value. .It Ev ZFSBOOT_CONFIRM_LAYOUT If set and the installation is interactive, allow the user to confirm the layout before continuing with the installation. @@ -542,12 +542,14 @@ the preamble can contain the variable instead of .Ev PARTITIONS (see below). -If using .Cm zfsboot, the variables +If using +.Cm zfsboot , +the variables .Ev ZFSBOOT_DISKS and .Ev ZFSBOOT_VDEV_TYPE must be set to create the pool of disks for the base system. -Usually, for a mirrored booting disk, this two variables looks like this: +Usually, for a mirrored booting disk, these two variables look like this: .Bd -literal -offset indent ZFSBOOT_DISKS="ada0 ada1" ZFSBOOT_VDEV_TYPE=mirror @@ -575,7 +577,7 @@ partitioning tool takes the .Ev ZFSBOOT_DATASETS variable to create the ZFS datasets on the base system. This variable definition can become large if the pool contains many datasets. -The default value of the +The default value of .Ev ZFSBOOT_DATASETS is: .Bd -literal -offset indent