newbies page (ppp)
glen.j.barber at gmail.com
Fri Dec 10 17:15:09 UTC 2010
On 12/10/10 11:18 AM, Ryusuke SUZUKI wrote:
> ryusuke> How about the following patch?
> ryusuke> diff -u -r1.58 newbies.sgml
> ryusuke> snip...
> ryusuke> + <li><p>There is a lot of documentation to help for setting up ppp.
> ryusuke> + You might start with at least those parts of the
> glen> I think with this rewording, "at least" can be removed.
> Thanks. "at leaset" is removed and clarify "those parts" as following,
> diff -u -r1.58 newbies.sgml
> --- newbies.sgml 9 Aug 2009 12:58:45 -0000 1.58
> +++ newbies.sgml 9 Dec 2010 15:29:53 -0000
> @@ -70,11 +70,10 @@
> beginners. You do not have to know much about anything to enjoy
> this one.</p></li>
> - <li><p>The first thing many people need to set up is ppp, and there is
> - a lot of documentation to help. You might start with at least those
> - parts of the
> - <a href="&url.books;/handbook/index.html">Handbook</a>
> - that are relevant to your needs, and explore the
> + <li><p>There is a lot of documentation to help for setting up ppp.
> + You might start with the <a
> + href="&url.books;/handbook/ppp-and-slip.html">PPP and SLIP</a>
> + chapter of the FreeBSD Handbook that are relevant to your needs, and explore the
Not to sound pedantic, but maybe 's/FreeBSD/&os;/' too? :)
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