cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall
chapter.sgml
Glen Barber
gjb at FreeBSD.org
Sun Oct 9 01:25:23 UTC 2011
On 10/8/11 9:21 PM, Warren Block wrote:
> wblock 2011-10-09 01:21:53 UTC
>
> FreeBSD doc repository
>
> Modified files:
> en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml
> Log:
> Various fixes:
> "effective at improving performance" is correct in English.
> "issues with the installation" is vague, reworded.
> Expand/clarify BIOS boot menu information.
> Spelling/grammar.
> Simplify Introducing bsdinstall.
> Expand/clarify mirror site description choice.
> Attempt to remove unnecessary instances of "the" and "you".
> "Booting" is used in this doc more than "restarting".
> Add link to network information.
>
And it was approved by gjb :)
--
Glen Barber | gjb at FreeBSD.org
FreeBSD Documentation Project
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