cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

[Warren Block]

wblock      2011-10-09 01:21:53 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  Various fixes:
  "effective at improving performance" is correct in English.
  "issues with the installation" is vague, reworded.
  Expand/clarify BIOS boot menu information.
  Spelling/grammar.
  Simplify Introducing bsdinstall.
  Expand/clarify mirror site description choice.
  Attempt to remove unnecessary instances of "the" and "you".
  "Booting" is used in this doc more than "restarting".
  Add link to network information.
  
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