cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security
chapter.sgml
Ganbold
ganbold at micom.mng.net
Mon Jul 14 08:56:09 UTC 2008
Remko Lodder wrote:
> On Mon, July 14, 2008 10:08 am, Ganbold wrote:
>
>> Tom Rhodes wrote:
>>
>>> trhodes 2008-07-13 18:23:57 UTC
>>>
>>> FreeBSD doc repository
>>>
>>> Modified files:
>>> en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security chapter.sgml
>>> Log:
>>> Rewrite the IPsec section to bring it up to date and make it easier to
>>> get a VPN up and running. While here, remove discussion on FAST_IPSEC
>>> since it's no longer a valid kernel option.
>>>
>>> PR: 121863
>>> Quick review by: remko
>>>
>>> Revision Changes Path
>>> 1.324 +293 -829
>>> doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml
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>> Tom,
>>
>> I think you meant:
>>
>> <para>At this point, both networks should be available and
>> seem to be part of the same network. Most likely both
>> networks are protected by a firewall, as they should be. To
>> - allow traffic to flow between them, rules need to be added
>> + allow traffic flow between them, rules need to be added
>>
>> Maybe I'm wrong here.
>>
>> thanks,
>>
>> Ganbold
>>
>
> I think the current line is right. "Traffic to flow" means that it "can
> happen", traffic flow means that it happends...
>
You are right, probably I have just misunderstood the whole sentence's
meaning while translating :)
Ganbold
> Cheers
> remko
>
>
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