cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security chapter.sgml

Remko Lodder remko at elvandar.org
Mon Jul 14 08:32:34 UTC 2008


On Mon, July 14, 2008 10:08 am, Ganbold wrote:
> Tom Rhodes wrote:
>> trhodes     2008-07-13 18:23:57 UTC
>>
>>   FreeBSD doc repository
>>
>>   Modified files:
>>     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security chapter.sgml
>>   Log:
>>   Rewrite the IPsec section to bring it up to date and make it easier to
>>   get a VPN up and running.  While here, remove discussion on FAST_IPSEC
>>   since it's no longer a valid kernel option.
>>
>>   PR:                     121863
>>   Quick review by:        remko
>>
>>   Revision  Changes    Path
>>   1.324     +293 -829
>> doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml
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> Tom,
>
> I think you meant:
>
>       <para>At this point, both networks should be available and
>     seem to be part of the same network.  Most likely both
>     networks are protected by a firewall, as they should be.  To
> -    allow traffic to flow between them, rules need to be added
> +    allow traffic flow between them, rules need to be added
>
> Maybe I'm wrong here.
>
> thanks,
>
> Ganbold

I think the current line is right. "Traffic to flow" means that it "can
happen", traffic flow means that it happends...

Cheers
remko

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