svn commit: r207283 - head/usr.bin/gzip

[Ben Kaduk]

On Tue, Apr 27, 2010 at 1:50 PM, Xin LI <delphij at freebsd.org> wrote:
> Author: delphij
> Date: Tue Apr 27 17:50:43 2010
> New Revision: 207283
> URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/207283
>
> Log:
>  Language improvements to make the BUGS section easier to read.
>
>  Reviewed by:  Alexander Best <alexbestms wwu de>
>  MFC after:    13 days
>
> Modified:
>  head/usr.bin/gzip/gzip.1
>
> Modified: head/usr.bin/gzip/gzip.1
> ==============================================================================
> --- head/usr.bin/gzip/gzip.1    Tue Apr 27 15:59:38 2010        (r207282)
> +++ head/usr.bin/gzip/gzip.1    Tue Apr 27 17:50:43 2010        (r207283)
> @@ -218,8 +218,8 @@ with unpack support written by
>  .An Xin LI Aq delphij at FreeBSD.org .
>  .Sh BUGS
>  According to RFC 1952, the recorded file size is stored in a 32-bit
> -integer and therefore it can not represent files that is bigger than
> -4GB in size.  This limitation also applies to
> +integer, therefore, it can not represent files larger than 4GB.
> +This limitation also applies to

Still not quite right -- the old version was wrong because it had
"files that is" instead of "files that are".  The new version has a
comma splice, though -- the comma in "32-bit integer, therefore"
should be replaced with either a semicolon or a full stop.

I would probably also put in two "the"s in the text following this
change -- "the -l option" and "the gzip utility".

-Ben Kaduk

>  .Fl l
>  option of
>  .Nm
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