svn commit: r195619 - head/share/man/man4

[Robert Noland]

On Mon, 2009-07-13 at 21:04 +0200, Joel Dahl wrote:
> Ben Kaduk skrev:
> > It would be nice to be consistent about using "and", "+"
> > or neither for the parentheticals.
> > Also, "LFE" does not appear to be expanded to "low frequency
> > enhancement" anywhere ....
> 
> I've fixed most of the issues you reported now, thanks.  I didn't expand LFE 
> though, because I'm not sure where I should put the explanation.

I'm no writer... but what I remember from our technical writers is to
just expand the acronym on first use.  Once people know what it stands
for they can google it for an explanation if they need it....

robert.

> Btw, if you have any more suggestions, just send them over.  I think the 
> entire man page needs more love.
> 
> --
> Joel

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Robert Noland <rnoland at FreeBSD.org>
FreeBSD
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