svn commit: r185448 - head/share/man/man4
Ben Kaduk
minimarmot at gmail.com
Sat Nov 29 11:39:10 PST 2008
On Sat, Nov 29, 2008 at 1:58 PM, Christian Brueffer
<brueffer at freebsd.org> wrote:
> Author: brueffer
> Date: Sat Nov 29 18:58:20 2008
> New Revision: 185448
> URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/185448
>
> Log:
> Bring this a little closer to our manpage style.
>
> Modified:
> head/share/man/man4/upgt.4
>
> Modified: head/share/man/man4/upgt.4
> ==============================================================================
> --- head/share/man/man4/upgt.4 Sat Nov 29 18:21:31 2008 (r185447)
> +++ head/share/man/man4/upgt.4 Sat Nov 29 18:58:20 2008 (r185448)
> @@ -49,7 +49,7 @@
> .\" OF THE USE OF THIS SOFTWARE, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE POSSIBILITY OF
> .\" SUCH DAMAGE.
> .\"
> -.Dd $Mdocdate: April 17 2008 $
> +.Dd April 17, 2008
> .Os
> .Dt UPGT 4
> .Sh NAME
> @@ -140,29 +140,43 @@ driver can be configured at runtime with
> .\"users have to download these files on their own.
> This driver requires the
> .Nm upgtfw
> -be installed before it will work.
> +firmware be installed before it will work.
At the risk of being a pedant, I think the grammar is not quite
correct, here -- either "This driver requires that the upgtfw firmware
be installed before it will work", or (my preference) "This driver
requires the upgtfw firmware to be installed
before it will work."
-Ben Kaduk
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