svn commit: r335841 - head/share/man/man4

[Kristof Provost]

Author: kp
Date: Sun Jul  1 15:17:53 2018
New Revision: 335841
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/335841

Log:
  carp: Minor language improvements in the man page
  
  Submitted by:	Massimiliano Stucchi <max AT stucchi.ch>

Modified:
  head/share/man/man4/carp.4

Modified: head/share/man/man4/carp.4
==============================================================================
--- head/share/man/man4/carp.4	Sun Jul  1 13:50:37 2018	(r335840)
+++ head/share/man/man4/carp.4	Sun Jul  1 15:17:53 2018	(r335841)
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ An arbitrary number of virtual host IDs can be configu
 An arbitrary number of IPv4 or IPv6 addresses can be attached to a particular
 vhid.
 It is important that all hosts participating in a vhid have the same list
-of prefixes configured on the vhid, since all prefixes are included in the
+of prefixes configured on the vhid, since all the prefixes are included in the
 cryptographic checksum supplied in each advertisement.
 Multiple vhids running on one interface participate in master/backup
 elections independently.
@@ -123,10 +123,10 @@ Values above 1 enable logging of bad
 packets.
 The default value is 1.
 .It Va net.inet.carp.demotion
-This value shows current level of CARP demotion.
+This value shows the current level of CARP demotion.
 The value is added to the actual advskew sent in announcements for
 all vhids.
-At normal system operation the demotion factor is zero.
+During normal system operation the demotion factor is zero.
 However, problematic conditions raise its level: when
 .Nm
 experiences problem with sending announcements, when an interface
@@ -300,11 +300,11 @@ To see
 .Nm
 packets decoded in
 .Xr tcpdump 1
-output, one needs to specify
+output, one needs to specify the
 .Fl T Ar carp
 option, otherwise
 .Xr tcpdump 1
-tries to interpret them as VRRP packets:
+will interpret them as VRRP packets:
 .Bd -literal -offset indent
 tcpdump -npi vlan0 -T carp
 .Ed