svn commit: r318468 - in stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1: hardware readme

Glen Barber gjb at FreeBSD.org
Thu May 18 16:24:13 UTC 2017


Author: gjb
Date: Thu May 18 16:24:11 2017
New Revision: 318468
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/318468

Log:
  Fix grammar nits.
  
  Sponsored by:	The FreeBSD Foundation

Modified:
  stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml
  stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml

Modified: stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml	Thu May 18 16:24:10 2017	(r318467)
+++ stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml	Thu May 18 16:24:11 2017	(r318468)
@@ -555,7 +555,7 @@
       </itemizedlist>
 
       <para>The following Sun &ultrasparc; systems are not tested but
-	believed to be also supported by &os;:</para>
+	believed to also be supported by &os;:</para>
 
       <itemizedlist>
 	<listitem>
@@ -581,7 +581,7 @@
       </itemizedlist>
 
       <para>The following Fujitsu &primepower; systems are not tested
-	but believed to be also supported by &os;:</para>
+	but believed to also be supported by &os;:</para>
 
       <itemizedlist>
 	<listitem>
@@ -620,11 +620,11 @@
   is highly recommended to try to keep the formatting of
   this section consistent.
 
-  We give manpage references using the &man entities where
-  possible.  If a driver has no manpage (and consequently no
+  We give manual page references using the &man entities where
+  possible.  If a driver has no manual page (and consequently no
   &man entity, we simply give the name of the driver).
   Please avoid doing &man entity conversions unless you
-  know for sure that an entity and manpage exist; sweeps through
+  know for sure that an entity and manual page exist; sweeps through
   this file to fix "missed" conversions are likely to break the
   build.
   -->

Modified: stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml	Thu May 18 16:24:10 2017	(r318467)
+++ stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml	Thu May 18 16:24:11 2017	(r318468)
@@ -219,7 +219,7 @@
       <para>For any questions or general technical support issues,
 	please send mail to the &a.questions;.</para>
 
-      <para>If you're tracking the &release.branch; development
+      <para>If you are tracking the &release.branch; development
 	efforts, you <emphasis>must</emphasis> join the &a.current;,
 	in order to keep abreast of recent developments and changes
 	that may affect the way you use and maintain the


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