svn commit: r41471 - projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip

[Benjamin Kaduk]

On Mon, 22 Apr 2013, Dru Lavigne wrote:

>  Make formatting for ppp command more consistent.
>
>  Approved by:  bcr (mentor)
>
> Modified:
>  projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.xml
>
> Modified: projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.xml
> ==============================================================================
> --- projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.xml	Mon Apr 22 16:14:28 2013	(r41470)
> +++ projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.xml	Mon Apr 22 18:01:07 2013	(r41471)
> @@ -535,8 +536,8 @@ protocol: ppp</screen>
> 		  otherwise <literal>HISADDR</literal> will not yet
> 		  be initialized.</para>
>
> -		<para>If you do not wish to run ppp in
> -		  <option>-auto</option>, this line should be moved
> +		<para>If you do not wish to run <command>ppp</command>
> +		  in <option>-auto</option>, this line should be moved

This should take 'mode' per the next chunk.

> 		  to the <filename>ppp.linkup</filename> file.</para>
> 	      </listitem>
> 	    </varlistentry>
> @@ -544,11 +545,12 @@ protocol: ppp</screen>
>
> 	  <para>It is not necessary to add an entry to
> 	    <filename>ppp.linkup</filename> when you have a static
> -	    IP address and are running ppp in <option>-auto</option>
> -	    mode as your routing table entries are already correct
> -	    before you connect.  You may however wish to create an
> -	    entry to invoke programs after connection.  This is
> -	    explained later with the sendmail example.</para>
> +	    IP address and are running <command>ppp</command> in
> +	    <option>-auto</option> mode as your routing table entries
> +	    are already correct before you connect.  You may however

However is probably not needed but if present should be set off by commas.

> +	    wish to create an entry to invoke programs after
> +	    connection.  This is explained later with the sendmail
> +	    example.</para>
>
> 	  <para>Example configuration files can be found in the
> 	    <filename
> @@ -1173,10 +1177,11 @@ ifconfig_tun0=</programlisting>
> 	  <programlisting>ppp -auto mysystem</programlisting>
>
> 	  <para>This script is executed at network configuration time,
> -	    starting your ppp daemon in automatic mode.  If you have
> -	    a LAN for which this machine is a gateway, you may also
> -	    wish to use the <option>-alias</option> switch.  Refer
> -	    to the manual page for further details.</para>
> +	    starting your <command>ppp</command> daemon in automatic
> +	    mode.  If you have a LAN for which this machine is a

This should be <option>-auto</option> mode for consistency with the above.


-Ben

> +	    gateway, you may also wish to use the
> +	    <option>-alias</option> switch.  Refer to the manual page
> +	    for further details.</para>
> 	</note>
>
> 	<para>Make sure that the router program is set to