svn commit: r50480 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status

Wed Jul 12 22:32:24 UTC 2017

Author: bjk
Date: Wed Jul 12 22:32:23 2017
New Revision: 50480
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/50480

Log:
  Edits to the 2017Q2 report from linimon

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2017-04-2017-06.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2017-04-2017-06.xml
==============================================================================

--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2017-04-2017-06.xml	Wed Jul 12 20:17:45 2017	(r50479)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2017-04-2017-06.xml	Wed Jul 12 22:32:23 2017	(r50480)
@@ -153,8 +153,8 @@
 	more useful than reporting a 64-bit <tt>dev_t</tt> value, for
 	the sake of <tt>pstat</tt>.</p>
 
-      <p>Updating note: strictly follow the instructions in
-	<tt>UPDATING</tt>.  Build and install the new kernel with the
+      <p>Updating note: <strong>strictly</strong> follow the instructions
+	in <tt>UPDATING</tt>.  Build and install the new kernel with the
 	<tt>COMPAT_FREEBSD11</tt> option enabled, then reboot, and
 	only then install the new world.</p>
 
@@ -456,7 +456,7 @@
 	licensed under the GPL.) The current version supports overlays
 	and is able to compile every DTS used by the &os; arm
 	releases.  The ports GPL version was updated to the latest
-	release (1.4.4).  The in-tree GPL version is still present and
+	release (1.4.4).  The in-tree GPL version is still present but
 	the goal is to remove it before &os; 12.0.</p>
     </body>
   </project>
@@ -574,7 +574,7 @@
     <body>
       <p>ENA (Elastic Network Adapter) is a 25G SmartNIC developed by
 	Annapurna Labs and is based on a custom ARMv8 chip.  This is a
-	high performance networking card available in AWS offering.
+	high performance networking card available in the AWS offering.
 	It introduces enhancements in network utilization scalability
 	on EC2 machines under control of various operating systems, in
 	particular &os;.</p>
@@ -605,7 +605,7 @@
 	<li>RSS</li>
       </ul>
 
-      <p>The driver is now available in kernel source tree since
+      <p>The driver is available in the kernel source tree as of
 	r318647.</p>
     </body>
 
@@ -655,7 +655,7 @@
   </project>
 
   <project cat="kern">
-    <title>pNFS Werver Plan B</title>
+    <title>pNFS Server Plan B</title>
 
     <contact>
       <person>
