svn commit: r50136 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports

Brad Davis brd at FreeBSD.org
Sun Apr 9 00:17:46 UTC 2017


Author: brd
Date: Sun Apr  9 00:17:44 2017
New Revision: 50136
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/50136

Log:
  Fix some capitalization and grammar.
  
  PR:		218237
  Submitted by:	Tyler Pelaez <nrdftr616 at gmail.com>

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml	Thu Apr  6 19:23:40 2017	(r50135)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml	Sun Apr  9 00:17:44 2017	(r50136)
@@ -277,14 +277,14 @@ subversion-static-<replaceable>1.8.8_2</
 subversion16-<replaceable>1.6.23_4</replaceable>
 subversion17-<replaceable>1.7.16_2</replaceable></screen>
 
-	<para>Package names include the version number and in case of
+	<para>Package names include the version number and, in the case of
 	  ports based on python, the version number of the version of
 	  python the package was built with.  Some ports also have
-	  multiple versions available.  In case of
-	  <application>subversion</application> there are different
+	  multiple versions available.  In the case of
+	  <application>Subversion</application>, there are different
 	  versions available, as well as different compile options.
 	  In this case, the statically linked version of
-	  <application>subversion</application>.  When indicating
+	  <application>Subversion</application>.  When indicating
 	  which package to install, it is best to specify the
 	  application by the port origin, which is the path in the
 	  ports tree.  Repeat the <command>pkg search</command> with


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