svn commit: r45575 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/porting-why

[Mathieu Arnold]

Author: mat (ports committer)
Date: Tue Sep  9 15:22:02 2014
New Revision: 45575
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/45575

Log:
  igor -Ry and some other rewording and fixes.
  
  Differential Revision:	https://reviews.freebsd.org/D649
  Reviewed by:	wblock
  Sponsored by:	Absolight

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/porting-why/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/porting-why/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/porting-why/chapter.xml	Tue Sep  9 13:12:57 2014	(r45574)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/porting-why/chapter.xml	Tue Sep  9 15:22:02 2014	(r45575)
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
     in mind when reading this document.</para>
 
   <para>In &os;, anyone may submit a new port, or volunteer to
-    maintain an existing port if it is unmaintained—you do not
-    need any special commit privileges to do so.</para>
+    maintain an existing unmaintained port. No special commit
+    privilege is needed.</para>
 </chapter>