svn commit: r44937 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/laptop
Benedict Reuschling
bcr at FreeBSD.org
Sat May 24 15:39:45 UTC 2014
Author: bcr
Date: Sat May 24 15:39:44 2014
New Revision: 44937
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44937
Log:
Remove redundant markup and words around filename tags and capitalize titles.
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/laptop/article.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/laptop/article.xml
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--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/laptop/article.xml Sat May 24 15:33:58 2014 (r44936)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/laptop/article.xml Sat May 24 15:39:44 2014 (r44937)
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@
Option "Emulate3Buttons"
</programlisting>
- <para>in the <filename>xorg.conf</filename> file in the <literal>InputDevice</literal>
+ <para>in <filename>xorg.conf</filename> in the <literal>InputDevice</literal>
section.</para>
</sect1>
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@
</sect1>
<sect1 xml:id="pcmcia">
- <title>PCMCIA (PC Card) devices</title>
+ <title>PCMCIA (PC Card) Devices</title>
<para> Most laptops come with PCMCIA (also called PC Card)
slots; these are supported fine under FreeBSD. Look through
@@ -127,7 +127,7 @@
particular most modems (16-bit) should work fine, provided they
are not winmodems (these do exist even as PC Cards, so watch out).
If your card is recognised as a generic modem, note that the
- default <filename>pccard.conf</filename> file specifies a delay time of 10 seconds
+ default <filename>pccard.conf</filename> specifies a delay time of 10 seconds
(to avoid freezes on certain modems); this may well be
over-cautious for your modem, so you may want to play with it,
reducing it or removing it totally.</para>
@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@
<sect1 xml:id="power-management">
- <title>Power management</title>
+ <title>Power Management</title>
<para>Unfortunately, this is not very reliably supported under
FreeBSD. If you are lucky, some functions may work reliably;
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