svn commit: r43784 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide

[Warren Block]

Author: wblock
Date: Wed Feb  5 05:52:37 2014
New Revision: 43784
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/43784

Log:
  Add an 'svn up' step to the Ports repo copy answer (discussed on IRC
  with zi@).
  
  Add IDs to all the ports qandadiv elements for easy linking.  Other
  minor fixes.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml	Wed Feb  5 00:00:19 2014	(r43783)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml	Wed Feb  5 05:52:37 2014	(r43784)
@@ -572,7 +572,7 @@ You need a Passphrase to protect your se
 	<programlisting>Host svn.freebsd.org
 	User jarjar</programlisting>
 
-	<para>This is the simplest method, but it's hard to tell just
+	<para>This is the simplest method, but it is hard to tell just
 	  yet how much load it will place on the repository.
 	  Subversion is much faster than <acronym>CVS</acronym>,
 	  however.</para>
@@ -2392,7 +2392,7 @@ ControlPersist yes</screen>
 		username on the &os; cluster.</para>
 
 	      <para>If the submitter is the maintainer of the port
-		to which you are commiting include "(maintainer)"
+		to which you are committing, include "(maintainer)"
 		after the email address.</para>
 
 	      <para>Avoid obfuscating the email address of the
@@ -2685,7 +2685,7 @@ MFC after:          1 month</programlist
   </sect1>
 
   <sect1 xml:id="if-in-doubt">
-    <title>If in doubt...</title>
+    <title>If in Doubt...</title>
 
     <para>When you are not sure about something, whether it be a
       technical issue or a project convention be sure to ask.  If you
@@ -3745,7 +3745,7 @@ MFC after:          1 month</programlist
     <title>Ports Specific FAQ</title>
 
     <qandaset>
-      <qandadiv>
+      <qandadiv xml:id="ports-qa-adding">
 	<title>Adding a New Port</title>
 
 	<qandaentry>
@@ -3819,7 +3819,7 @@ MFC after:          1 month</programlist
 	</qandaentry>
       </qandadiv>
 
-      <qandadiv>
+      <qandadiv xml:id="ports-qa-removing">
 	<title>Removing an Existing Port</title>
 
 	<qandaentry>
@@ -3890,7 +3890,7 @@ MFC after:          1 month</programlist
 	</qandaentry>
       </qandadiv>
 
-      <qandadiv>
+      <qandadiv xml:id="ports-qa-re-adding">
 	<title>Re-adding a Deleted Port</title>
 
 	<qandaentry>
@@ -3959,7 +3959,7 @@ MFC after:          1 month</programlist
 	</qandaentry>
       </qandadiv>
 
-      <qandadiv>
+      <qandadiv xml:id="ports-qa-repocopies">
 	<title>Repository Copies</title>
 
 	<qandaentry>
@@ -4001,12 +4001,17 @@ MFC after:          1 month</programlist
 
 		<procedure>
 		  <step>
-		    <para>First make sure that you were using an up to
-		      date ports tree and the target directory does
+		    <para>Verify that the target directory does
 		      not exist.</para>
 		  </step>
 
 		  <step>
+		    <para>Use <command>svn up</command> to make
+		      certain the original files, directories, and
+		      checkout information is current.</para>
+		  </step>
+
+		  <step>
 		    <para>Use <command>svn move</command> or
 		      <command>svn copy</command> to do the repo
 		      copy.</para>
@@ -4109,7 +4114,7 @@ MFC after:          1 month</programlist
 	</qandaentry>
       </qandadiv>
 
-      <qandadiv>
+      <qandadiv xml:id="ports-qa-freeze">
 	<title>Ports Freeze</title>
 
 	<qandaentry>
@@ -4243,7 +4248,7 @@ MFC after:          1 month</programlist
 	</qandaentry>
       </qandadiv>
 
-      <qandadiv>
+      <qandadiv xml:id="ports-qa-new-category">
 	<title>Creating a New Category</title>
 
 	<qandaentry>
@@ -4449,7 +4454,7 @@ MFC after:          1 month</programlist
 	</qandaentry>
       </qandadiv>
 
-      <qandadiv>
+      <qandadiv xml:id="ports-qa-misc-questions">
 	<title>Miscellaneous Questions</title>
 
 	<qandaentry>