svn commit: r42066 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview
Warren Block
wblock at FreeBSD.org
Wed Jun 26 15:42:18 UTC 2013
Author: wblock
Date: Wed Jun 26 15:42:18 2013
New Revision: 42066
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42066
Log:
Minor wording and formatting changes.
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml
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--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml Wed Jun 26 15:40:23 2013 (r42065)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml Wed Jun 26 15:42:18 2013 (r42066)
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
<acronym>FDP</acronym>. Willingness to contribute is the only
membership requirement.</para>
- <para>This Primer shows the reader how to:</para>
+ <para>This primer shows the reader how to:</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
@@ -136,8 +136,8 @@
<sect1 id="overview-quick-start">
<title>Quick Start</title>
- <para>Here we describe the steps contributors must follow before
- they can make changes to the <acronym>FDP</acronym>. New
+ <para>Here we describe the steps contributors must take before
+ making changes to the <acronym>FDP</acronym>. New
contributors will interact with other members of the &os;
Documentation Team, which can assist in learning to use
<acronym>XML</acronym> and the suggestions in
@@ -235,7 +235,7 @@
the type of documentation being edited will generate that
documentation in split HTML format. For example, to build
the English version of the Handbook, type
- <userinput>make</userinput> in the
+ <command>make</command> in the
<filename>en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/</filename>
directory. This step is necessary to make sure that the
edits do not break the build.</para>
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