svn commit: r42058 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style

[Warren Block]

Author: wblock
Date: Wed Jun 26 04:23:10 2013
New Revision: 42058
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42058

Log:
  Point out that examples must be tested.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml
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--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml	Wed Jun 26 02:25:45 2013	(r42057)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml	Wed Jun 26 04:23:10 2013	(r42058)
@@ -71,8 +71,8 @@
 	rather than <quote>you can copy the file to
 	  <filename>/tmp</filename></quote>.</para>
 
-      <para>Give clear, correct examples.  A trivial example is better
-	than no example, but a good example is better yet.  Do not
+      <para>Give clear, correct, <emphasis>tested</emphasis> examples.  A trivial example is better
+	than no example.  A good example is better yet.  Do not
 	give bad examples, identifiable by apologies or sentences like
 	<quote>but really it should never be done that way</quote>.
 	Bad examples are worse than no examples.  Give good examples,