svn commit: r41965 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer

[Warren Block]

Author: wblock
Date: Thu Jun 20 15:32:15 2013
New Revision: 41965
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41965

Log:
  Include recent years in copyright notice, remove some uses of "you" in
  introduction, add suggestion about corrections and additions.  Remove the
  part about sections that are not complete being marked with a star, there
  are none.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/book.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/book.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/book.xml	Thu Jun 20 14:58:27 2013	(r41964)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/book.xml	Thu Jun 20 15:32:15 2013	(r41965)
@@ -70,15 +70,14 @@
       <para>Thank you for becoming a part of the FreeBSD Documentation
 	Project.  Your contribution is extremely valuable.</para>
 
-      <para>This primer covers everything you will need to know in
-	order to start contributing to the FreeBSD Documentation
-	Project, from the tools and software you will be using (both
+      <para>This primer covers details needed
+	to start contributing to the FreeBSD Documentation
+	Project, from the tools and software (both
 	mandatory and recommended) to the philosophy behind the
 	Documentation Project.</para>
 
-      <para>This document is a work in progress, and is not complete.
-	Sections that are known to be incomplete are indicated with a
-	<literal>*</literal> in their name.</para>
+      <para>This document is a work in progress.  Corrections and
+	additions are welcomed.</para>
     </abstract>
   </bookinfo>