svn commit: r42222 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status

Tue Jul 9 15:59:56 UTC 2013

Author: pgj
Date: Tue Jul  9 15:59:55 2013
New Revision: 42222
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42222

Log:
  - Improve wording for the core report entry
  
  Submitted by:	emaste

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-04-2013-06.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-04-2013-06.xml
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--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-04-2013-06.xml	Tue Jul  9 15:50:56 2013	(r42221)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-04-2013-06.xml	Tue Jul  9 15:59:55 2013	(r42222)
@@ -1766,21 +1766,22 @@ functionality through <tt>pkg(8)</tt>.</
     <body>
       <p>In the second quarter of 2013, the Core Team approved a new
 	Security Officer, Dag-Erling Smørgrav and his deputy, Xin
-	Li, who replaced Simon Nielsen.  Peter Wemm volunteered to
-	reorganize and take the lead on administration of the &os;
-	cluster and then the Core Team has approved and welcome Glen
-	Barber and Ryan Steinmetz as additions to his team.</p>
+	Li.  The Core Team acknowledges Simon Nielsen, the outgoing
+	Security Officer, for his work in the role.  Peter Wemm took the
+	lead on the reorganization and administration of the &os;
+	cluster, and with the Core Team's approval, Glen Barber and Ryan
+	Steinmetz were welcomed to the cluster administration team.</p>
 
       <p>Based on the recommendation and experiences of Martin Wilke,
-	core also supported establishing a liaison role between port
-	managers and release engineers in order to improve their
-	communication, especially for preparing releases.  This liaison
-	became Bryan Drewery.</p>
-
-      <p>Following up on the request from Eitan Adler, core agreed to
-	remove CVS from the base system, which was soon followed by
-	importing a lightweight version of Subversion tools, implemented
-	by Peter Wemm.</p>
+	the Core Team also supported establishing a liaison role between
+	port managers and release engineers in order to improve their
+	communication, especially for preparing releases.  The Core Team
+	welcomes Bryan Drewery to this role.</p>
+
+      <p>Following up on the request from Eitan Adler, the Core Team
+	agreed to remove CVS from the base system, which was soon followed
+	by importing a lightweight version of Subversion tools,
+	implemented by Peter Wemm.</p>
 
       <p>There were src commit bits issued for 3 new developers and 1
 	existing committer received extension in this quarter.</p>
