svn commit: r41054 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge
Warren Block
wblock at wonkity.com
Wed Feb 27 22:36:27 UTC 2013
On Wed, 27 Feb 2013, Eitan Adler wrote:
> Author: eadler
> Date: Wed Feb 27 21:23:57 2013
> New Revision: 41054
> URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41054
>
> Log:
> Fix a bunch of grammos and typos
>
> PR: docs/176451
> Submitted by: Tom <trh411 at gmail.com>
> Approved by: bcr (mentor)
>
> Modified:
> head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml
>
> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml
> ==============================================================================
> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml Wed Feb 27 21:23:54 2013 (r41053)
> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml Wed Feb 27 21:23:57 2013 (r41054)
...
> @@ -2580,7 +2579,7 @@ Script done, …</screen>
>
> <para>Next, build a dummy set of directories to install the
> new <filename class="directory">/etc</filename> and other
> - files into. <filename
> + files into <filename
> class="directory">/var/tmp/root</filename> is a reasonable
> choice:</para>
That results in
"Next, build a dummy set of directories to install the new /etc and
other files into /var/tmp/root is a reasonable choice:"
I would suggest just modifying the first sentence:
"Build a temporary set of directories into which the new
<filename class="directory">/etc</filename> and other files can be
installed."
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