svn commit: r41024 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users

[Warren Block]

On Thu, 21 Feb 2013, Benjamin Kaduk wrote:

> On Thu, 21 Feb 2013, Dru Lavigne wrote:
>
>> @@ -700,11 +683,9 @@ passwd: done</screen>
>>       <secondary>quotas</secondary>
>>     </indexterm>
>>     <indexterm><primary>disk quotas</primary></indexterm>
>> -    <para>Disk quotas limit disk usage to users, and
>> -      they
>> -      provide a way to quickly check that usage without
>> -      calculating it every time.  Quotas are discussed in <xref
>> -	linkend="quotas"/>.</para>
>> +    <para>Disk quotas limit disk usage to users and provide a way to
>> +      quickly check that usage without calculating it every time.
>
> This sentence is still not quite there.
> Maybe "Disk quotas limit the disk usage available to users" or "limit the 
> disk usage of users"?

"Disk quotas limit the amount of disk space available to users"

>> +      Quotas are discussed in <link linkend="quotas"></link>.</para>

Is that the right way to do that?  <link></link> should be around some 
text to make a hyperlink.  <xref> generates the text, like Chapter 21. 
(I think.)