svn commit: r41010 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors

[Eitan Adler]

On 18 February 2013 16:01, Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk at mit.edu> wrote:
> How is refusing bin and usr.bin relevant for people who only know English
> and German (the part of the text above the quoted portion)?

Ugh.  In trying to preserve the useful portions of the documentation I
trimmed too little.
I'll re-read the document and see what else I could trim or re-write

>> -       <para>With this very useful feature, those users who are on
>> +       <para>With this very feature, those users who are on
>
> Do we care more that it is this particular feature or that it is a useful
> feature?  ("With this very ..." does not seem particularly consistent with
> our style.)

Good point.  I kept the wording that was there, but perhaps I should
have been more aggressive.


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