svn commit: r40947 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems

[Benjamin Kaduk]

On Mon, 11 Feb 2013, Dru Lavigne wrote:

> Modified:
>  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems/chapter.xml
>
> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems/chapter.xml
> ==============================================================================
> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems/chapter.xml	Mon Feb 11 14:50:33 2013	(r40946)
> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems/chapter.xml	Mon Feb 11 14:58:34 2013	(r40947)
> @@ -27,32 +27,30 @@
> +      They allow users to upload and store files, provide access
> +      to data, and make hard drives useful.  Different operating
> +      systems differ in their native file system.  Traditionally, the
> +      native &os; file system has been the Unix File System
> +      <acronym>UFS</acronym> which has been recently modernized as
> +      <acronym>UFS2</acronym>.  Since &os; 7.0, the Z File

UFS2 is recent only in a very relative sense -- I used it (for non-root 
filesystems, I suppose) when I first picked up FreeBSD 5.2 in 2004.
We can probably just say "which has been modernized as UFS2" at this 
point.

> +      System <acronym>ZFS</acronym> is also available as a native file
>       system.</para>
>
> @@ -529,37 +509,34 @@ errors: No known data errors</screen>
>       <sect3>
> 	<title>Data Verification</title>
>
> -	<para>As previously mentioned, <acronym>ZFS</acronym> uses
> +	<para><acronym>ZFS</acronym> uses
> 	  <literal>checksums</literal> to verify the integrity of

Hmm, checksums probably doesn't need markup, here.

> -	  stored data.  They are enabled automatically upon creation
> +	  stored data.  These are enabled automatically upon creation
> 	  of file systems and may be disabled using the following
> 	  command:</para>
>
> @@ -571,43 +548,39 @@ config:
> +	<para>ZFS supports different types of quotas: the refquota,
> +	  the general quota, the user quota, and the group quota.
> +	  This section explains the basics of each type and includes
> +	  some usage instructions.</para>

Grammar is pretty lousy in this section, but you were just reformatting so 
I'll skip the details.

Some things to look at for the next pass, I guess.

-Ben