svn commit: r43326 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook
Warren Block
wblock at FreeBSD.org
Fri Dec 13 01:26:47 UTC 2013
Author: wblock
Date: Fri Dec 13 01:26:47 2013
New Revision: 43326
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/43326
Log:
Improve grammar, clarity. Expanded modifications inspired by PR.
PR: docs/184735
Submitted by: Diane Bruce <db at db.net>
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.xml Wed Dec 11 05:00:42 2013 (r43325)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.xml Fri Dec 13 01:26:47 2013 (r43326)
@@ -3844,14 +3844,14 @@ ALWAYS_KEEP_DISTFILES= yes
<sect2 xml:id="uses">
<title><varname>USES</varname></title>
- <para>There several parameters exist for defining different
- kind of features and dependencies that the port in question
- uses. They can be specified by adding the following line to
- the <filename>Makefile</filename> of the port:</para>
+ <para>Parameters can be added to define different
+ features and dependencies used by the port.
+ They are specified by adding this line to the
+ <filename>Makefile</filename>:</para>
<programlisting>USES= feature[:arguments]</programlisting>
- <para>For the complete list of such values, please see
+ <para>For the complete list of values, please see
<xref linkend="uses-values"/>.</para>
<warning>
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