svn commit: r39963 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing

[Eitan Adler]

Author: eadler
Date: Fri Nov  9 13:46:41 2012
New Revision: 39963
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/39963

Log:
  The core team does not provide 'tighter review'.  For code that
  shouldn't be released into HEAD there are mailing lists for review.
  
  Approved by:	jkois (mentor)

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/article.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/article.xml	Fri Nov  9 12:14:00 2012	(r39962)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/article.xml	Fri Nov  9 13:46:41 2012	(r39963)
@@ -400,9 +400,8 @@
 	welcome.</para>
 
       <para>If your change is of a potentially sensitive nature,
-	e.g. you are unsure of copyright issues governing its further
-	distribution or you are simply not ready to release it without
-	a tighter review first, then you should send it to &a.core;
+	such as if you are unsure of copyright issues governing its further
+	distribution then you should send it to &a.core;
 	directly rather than submitting it with &man.send-pr.1;.  The
 	&a.core; reaches a much smaller group of people who
 	do much of the day-to-day work on FreeBSD.  Note that this