svn commit: r40487 - head/ja_JP.eucJP/articles/problem-reports
Ryusuke SUZUKI
ryusuke at FreeBSD.org
Fri Dec 28 13:01:41 UTC 2012
Author: ryusuke
Date: Fri Dec 28 13:01:41 2012
New Revision: 40487
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/40487
Log:
- Refine translation.
- The reference to freebsd-beginners-jp is changed from the email
address to the ML introductory page.
Submitted by: Hiroo Ono <hiroo _at_ jp dot FreeBSD dot org>
References: [doc-jp-work 1314, 1318]
Modified:
head/ja_JP.eucJP/articles/problem-reports/article.xml
Modified: head/ja_JP.eucJP/articles/problem-reports/article.xml
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--- head/ja_JP.eucJP/articles/problem-reports/article.xml Fri Dec 28 07:19:40 2012 (r40486)
+++ head/ja_JP.eucJP/articles/problem-reports/article.xml Fri Dec 28 13:01:41 2012 (r40487)
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