svn commit: r54525 - head/ja_JP.eucJP/books/handbook/cutting-edge

[Ryusuke SUZUKI]

Author: ryusuke
Date: Thu Sep 24 14:21:27 2020
New Revision: 54525
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/54525

Log:
  Refine translation.

Modified:
  head/ja_JP.eucJP/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml

Modified: head/ja_JP.eucJP/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml
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--- head/ja_JP.eucJP/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml	Thu Sep 24 14:15:35 2020	(r54524)
+++ head/ja_JP.eucJP/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml	Thu Sep 24 14:21:27 2020	(r54525)
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