svn commit: r53958 - in head: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall share/images/books/handbook/bsdinstall

Sergio Carlavilla carlavilla at mailbox.org
Sun Mar 8 13:25:21 UTC 2020


Hi,

Sorry, my fault. I’ll correct it.

Thanks!

> On 8 Mar 2020, at 14:16, Marc Fonvieille <blackend at freebsd.org> wrote:
> 
> On 08.03.2020 10:39, Sergio Carlavilla Delgado wrote:
>> Author: carlavilla
>> Date: Sun Mar  8 10:39:30 2020
>> New Revision: 53958
>> URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/53958
>> 
>> Log:
>>  Add the hardening section to the handbook
>> 
>>  Submitted by:    carlavilla@
>>  Approved by:    bcr@
>>  Differential Revision:    https://reviews.freebsd.org/D23996
>> 
>> Added:
>>  head/share/images/books/handbook/bsdinstall/bsdinstall-hardening.png   (contents, props changed)
>> Modified:
>>  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/Makefile
>>  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml
>>  head/share/images/books/handbook/bsdinstall/bsdinstall-finalconfiguration.png
>> 
>> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/Makefile
>> ==============================================================================
>> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/Makefile    Sat Mar  7 20:37:19 2020    (r53957)
>> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/Makefile    Sun Mar  8 10:39:30 2020    (r53958)
>> @@ -64,6 +64,7 @@ IMAGES_EN+= bsdinstall/bsdinstall-distfile-verifying.p
>> IMAGES_EN+= bsdinstall/bsdinstall-final-confirmation.png
>> IMAGES_EN+= bsdinstall/bsdinstall-finalconfiguration.png
>> IMAGES_EN+= bsdinstall/bsdinstall-final-modification-shell.png
>> +IMAGES_EN+= bsdinstall/bsdinstall-hardening.png
>> IMAGES_EN+= bsdinstall/bsdinstall-keymap-10.png
>> IMAGES_EN+= bsdinstall/bsdinstall-keymap-loading.png
>> IMAGES_EN+= bsdinstall/bsdinstall-keymap-select-default.png
>> 
>> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml
>> ==============================================================================
>> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml    Sat Mar  7 20:37:19 2020    (r53957)
>> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml    Sun Mar  8 10:39:30 2020    (r53958)
>> @@ -939,7 +939,7 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID: 830b92d4.</s
>>    </mediaobject>
>>       </figure>
>> 
>> -      <para>After the keymaps have been loaded <application>bsdinstall</application> displays the
>> +      <para>After the keymaps have been loaded bsdinstall displays the
> 
> This reverts r53949.  Please readd it.
> 
> 
>>    menu shown in <xref linkend="bsdinstall-keymap-10"/>.  Use the
>>    up and down arrows to select the keymap that most closely
>>    represents the mapping of the keyboard attached to the system.
>> @@ -2308,7 +2308,7 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID: 830b92d4.</s
>>      <para><literal>ntpdate</literal> - Enable the automatic
>>        clock synchronization at boot time.  The functionality of
>>        this program is now available in the ntpd daemon.  After a
> 
>                                                ^^^^ &man.ntdp.8; should
>                        be used there.
> 
>> -        suitable period of mourning, the &man.ntpd.8; utility will
>> +        suitable period of mourning, the &man.ntpdate.8; utility will
>>        be retired.</para>
>>    </listitem>
>> 
> [...]
> 
> -- 
> Marc



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