svn commit: r53655 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config

Chris Rees crees at FreeBSD.org
Wed Dec 4 11:53:13 UTC 2019


Author: crees
Date: Wed Dec  4 11:53:12 2019
New Revision: 53655
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/53655

Log:
  Simplify language by removing spurious comma.
  
  While here, "must" conjugates with plural as well as singular.
  
  PR:			docs/241674
  Submitted by:		PauAmma <pauamma at gundo.com>
  Reviewed by:		bcr (first point)
  Differential Revision:	https://reviews.freebsd.org/D22648

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml	Wed Dec  4 10:02:19 2019	(r53654)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml	Wed Dec  4 11:53:12 2019	(r53655)
@@ -986,8 +986,8 @@ lo0: flags=8049<UP,LOOPBACK,RUNNING,MULTICAST> m
 	  before adding any lines.</para>
       </note>
 
-      <para>In the case, there is no <acronym>DHCP</acronym> server,
-	the <acronym>NIC</acronym>(s) have to be configured manually.
+      <para>If there is no <acronym>DHCP</acronym> server,
+	the <acronym>NIC</acronym>(s) must be configured manually.
 	Add a line for each <acronym>NIC</acronym> present on the
 	system, as seen in this example:</para>
 


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