svn commit: r51658 - head/ja_JP.eucJP/books/handbook/cutting-edge

[Ryusuke SUZUKI]

Author: ryusuke
Date: Thu May 17 10:09:34 2018
New Revision: 51658
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/51658

Log:
  Refine translation.

Modified:
  head/ja_JP.eucJP/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml

Modified: head/ja_JP.eucJP/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml
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--- head/ja_JP.eucJP/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml	Wed May 16 16:21:13 2018	(r51657)
+++ head/ja_JP.eucJP/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml	Thu May 17 10:09:34 2018	(r51658)
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