svn commit: r52673 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/12.0R

Guangyuan Yang ygy at FreeBSD.org
Tue Dec 11 22:08:21 UTC 2018


Author: ygy
Date: Tue Dec 11 22:08:19 2018
New Revision: 52673
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/52673

Log:
  Fix some typos in 12.0R announcement.
  
  PR:		233943
  Reported by:	Max Stucchi <max at stucchi.ch>
  Approved by:	gjb

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/12.0R/announce.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/12.0R/announce.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/12.0R/announce.xml	Tue Dec 11 20:51:57 2018	(r52672)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/12.0R/announce.xml	Tue Dec 11 22:08:19 2018	(r52673)
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@
 	  emulation.</p>
       </li>
       <li>
-	<p>The bhyve(8) utility is now able to be run withing
+	<p>The bhyve(8) utility is now able to be run within
 	  a jail(8).</p>
       </li>
       <li>
@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@
 	  booting into a "livefs" based rescue mode.  This should be
 	  all you need if you can burn and use DVD-sized media.</p>
 
-	<p>Additionally, this can be written to an USB memory stick
+	<p>Additionally, this can be written to a USB memory stick
 	  (flash drive) for the &arch.amd64; architecture and used to
 	  do an install on machines capable of booting off USB drives.
 	  It also supports booting into a "livefs" based rescue
@@ -193,7 +193,7 @@
 	  supports booting into a "livefs" based rescue mode.  There
 	  are no pre-built packages.</p>
 
-	<p>Additionally, this can be written to an USB memory stick
+	<p>Additionally, this can be written to a USB memory stick
 	  (flash drive) for the &arch.amd64; architecture and used to
 	  do an install on machines capable of booting off USB drives.
 	  It also supports booting into a "livefs" based rescue mode.
@@ -220,7 +220,7 @@
 	  perform a network based install (e.g., from an HTTP or FTP
 	  server) after booting from the CD.</p>
 
-	<p>Additionally, this can be written to an USB memory stick
+	<p>Additionally, this can be written to a USB memory stick
 	  (flash drive) for the &arch.amd64; architecture and used to
 	  do an install on machines capable of booting off USB drives.
 	  It also supports booting into a "livefs" based rescue mode.
@@ -241,7 +241,7 @@
       <dt>memstick</dt>
 
       <dd>
-	<p>This can be written to an USB memory stick (flash drive)
+	<p>This can be written to a USB memory stick (flash drive)
 	  and used to do an install on machines capable of booting off
 	  USB drives.  It also supports booting into a "livefs" based
 	  rescue mode.  There are no pre-built packages.</p>
@@ -261,7 +261,7 @@
       <dt>mini-memstick</dt>
 
       <dd>
-	<p>This can be written to an USB memory stick (flash drive)
+	<p>This can be written to a USB memory stick (flash drive)
 	  and used to boot a machine, but does not contain the
 	  installation distribution sets on the medium itself, similar
 	  to the bootonly image.  It also supports booting into


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