svn commit: r52072 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction
Eitan Adler
eadler at FreeBSD.org
Thu Aug 2 10:35:37 UTC 2018
Author: eadler
Date: Thu Aug 2 10:35:36 2018
New Revision: 52072
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/52072
Log:
Introduction: use slightly more modern language
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml Wed Aug 1 17:16:29 2018 (r52071)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml Thu Aug 2 10:35:36 2018 (r52072)
@@ -198,10 +198,7 @@
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>World Wide Web servers<indexterm>
- <primary>web servers</primary>
- </indexterm>
- (standard or secure [SSL])</para>
+ <para>Web servers</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -233,7 +230,7 @@
<indexterm>
<primary>email</primary>
</indexterm>
- Electronic Mail servers</para>
+ Email servers</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
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