svn commit: r50456 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security

[Sevan Janiyan]

Author: sevan
Date: Fri Jul  7 17:33:44 2017
New Revision: 50456
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/50456

Log:
  Reword sentence about IPsec on legacy releases based on feedback from wblock.
  Drop space between macros.
  
  Approved by:	wblock bcr (mentors)
  Differential Revision:	https://reviews.freebsd.org/D11510

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml	Fri Jul  7 16:04:49 2017	(r50455)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml	Fri Jul  7 17:33:44 2017	(r50456)
@@ -2127,10 +2127,9 @@ Connection closed by foreign host.</screen>
       information on the <acronym>IPsec</acronym> subsystem in
       &os;.</para>
 
-    <para><acronym>IPsec</acronym> support is enabled by default on &os;   11 and newer.
-      To add <acronym>IPsec</acronym> support to the kernel of older &os; releases,
-      add the following options to the custom kernel configuration file
-      and rebuild the kernel using the instructions in <xref
+    <para><acronym>IPsec</acronym> support is enabled by default on &os; 11 and later.
+      For previous versions of &os;, add these options to a custom kernel 
+      configuration file and rebuild the kernel using the instructions in <xref
 	linkend="kernelconfig"/>:</para>
 
     <indexterm>